Okay redone and modified
Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:59pm

Name: Doomwalker


Character Creation: Reploid

Gender: Male

Class: Assassin

Type: Ninja


Competitor - You strive to be the best in all that you do. Even among friends, everything is a contest.

Gambler - No guts, no glory. You enjoy taking risks and don't mind being reckless. After all, life is just a game of luck.

Total Points: 100,000


Acute Sense - One of your senses (sight) is far better than average. You may purchase this advantage multiple times, but it must apply to a different sense each time. [-15,000包

Acute Sense - One of your senses (hearing) is far better than average. You may purchase this advantage multiple times, but it must apply to a different sense each time. [-15,000包

Ambidexterity - You have no off hand. You are equally adept with both your right and your left hand. You can write, fight, etc. with either one you choose. (But it still requires special training to fight with both hands at once.) [-10,000包

Daredevil - Your balance, agility, and courage allow you to easily perform risky acrobatic feats. [-15,000包

Determination - You have an iron will and incredible endurance. This means that you do not tire easily, can hold up under torture, and are almost unstoppable when pursuing a goal. You are physically and mentally resilient. [-20,000包

Escape Artist - You are very talented at escaping bonds and wriggling through tight spaces. [-10,000包

Kung-Fu - You are a master of the martial arts. When unarmed you are dangerous at close combat. Your body is a deadly weapon. [-20,000包

Lightning Reflexes - You are able to react with uncanny quickness. (but this has no effect on your overall speed) [-15,000包

Intuition - Sometimes you just have a feeling that someone is lying to you, or that danger is present. Its almost like a sixth sense. [-20,000包

Total Points: -20,000


Hideous - You are staggeringly ugly. [+20,000包

Total Points: 20,000

Primary Weapon
titanium daggers

Secondary Weapon(s)

Special Accessories
compartments hidden in gauntlets

Special Abilities
The Darkness Program: seems to fill out Doomwalkers hollow body as well as allow him the ability to blend into any shadow that he is touching.

Animal Ally


Total remaining after everything:


Height: 510
Weight: 156
Eyes: red
Hair: none
Complexion: bone
Build: skeleton with shadows filling it in
Scars/Distinguishing Marks: skull for the right shoulder has been blackened by flames

Head: skull with red dots in the eye sockets

Body: a rib cage with a red core connecting them in the middle and a generator creating black void filling up the inside

Arms: shadows incasing a skeletal arms with gauntlets for forearms and hands

Waist: just a plain black belt

Legs: straight black blue jeans having combat boots that have been painted black connected to the bottom

Weapon Locations
bone/titanium daggers: compartments in both gauntlets


Doomwalker has never been like any other reploid. He has no artificial skin over his skeletal structure and looks like the living dead. He always seems to cause an uneasy feeling in a room whenever he is about to do something unsavory. Hes a firm believer in luck; whats life without a little risk? He cant stand being outdone in anything. He works at everything he does so he can be the best.

For years of his life, Dr. Zenoah had worked to create the perfect army. Now Dr. Zenoah had become cynical over the years towards humans despite being only part reploid. During the time when he was still only human, his lab assistants had made a serious grammatical error during a routine check of the equipment. This resulted in the complete meltdown of his lab, leaving the doctor nearly lifeless. If it hadnt been for his reploid helper he would have died. Ever since then he has hated human flaws, and has believed that reploids were superior.

Now, the doctor specialized in speed and surreptitious reploids. So the doctor had been working on multiple types of stealth reploids. Also knowing that some of the reploids in his army would be caught he thought it would be funny installing a detonation device in each one; so that when/if they got caught or were killed they could self-destruct doing serious damage to everyone and everything around them.
Now the doctor knew that separately each reploid that he made had its flaws and weaknesses, but together they were strong. So he created his separate project with the technology used to make all the reploids that he was mass producing. Except this one didnt have the detonation device in it.

He gave him a different design he wanted his creation to be different from the rest. The doctor made his project look almost like death itself; he wanted the last thing a person saw before he killed them was the look of two beady red eyes staring out at them from a skull. He even made a special program known as darkness which filled in the skeletal structure with a black mass and gave it the ability to blend into shadows. He made his gauntlets hold up to twenty titanium daggers in each one at a time instead of the normal amount the regular copies held except for his he made them look like sharpened bones.

Now Dr. Zenoah had given his newest creation which he began calling Project Doomwalker the ability of free will. He gave him a personality and a drive to be the best at everything he did. Now the day Doomwalker was activated Dr. Zenoah allowed his former helper reploid train him. After the accident the doctor decided to outfit the reploid that saved his life with a beam saber and upgrades meant for the upper class military personnel; along with modifications to his body so he could handle the upgrades.

Now after several weeks of training Doomwalker had became proficient at combat against just about any blade type weapon, but that wasnt enough for the doctor he still wasnt satisfied. The doctor knew that Doomwalker had incredible learning capabilities and wanted him to not only be good with his weapons, but to be good with nothing more than his hands. So for several months he had him train against several targets at once and took away his blades. So his reflexes would increase and he could handle himself even if he ran out of his blades.

Now Doomwalker had slowly grown bored with just training with the reploids the doctor was creating. So one day during a routine training day he began to mock the reploids he was training with. Just trying to get them to get angry and actually try and hurt him. This inevitably worked as all 3 of them upped their beam sabers to kill instead of stun. The fight lasted for several minutes until Doomwalker was through playing with them. He leaped up into the air twisted his body into a spiral and launched 3 daggers that pierced all 3 of the reploids skulls killing them instantly.

Now Doomwalker had forgotten about the self-destruct program and didnt realize he was in the middle of Dr. Zenoahs base. As the 3 reploids hit the ground their eyes started flashing red and at that point he remembered what happened when the doctors reploids died. As soon as he realized this he took off at a rapid pace just trying to escape from the inevitable destruction of the base.

He managed to get just outside of the blast radius just as the entire base went up in flames. Looking back Well at least now I know that Im better than all of them cause their dead he said. Now I just have to go out and try my luck and see if I can find any place that would accept someone like me. As he walked off into the distance all he could do was see where fortune took him.

  • I did say so!Zeo, Tue Sep 14 3:38pm
    So okay, lets get this show on the road. I. Are you sure you meant thief? This guy seems more assassin/ninja than thief. Especially given his personality type and capabilities. II. Just because he's... more
    • Okay redone and modified — doomwalker, Tue Sep 14 7:59pm
      • Much better.Zeo, Wed Sep 22 10:16am
        You still need to capitalize the first word after the Doomwalker System. As to the rest, more than acceptable. My personal opinion though? You should go back through his bio and cut down all the... more
        • dangdoomwalker, Wed Sep 22 8:03pm
          Dang, okay I'm still working on that whole writing thing. I'm trying to get better at it, and as for my character sheet do I need to redo it or just submit it as is?
          • You can submit it as it stands.Zeo, Wed Sep 22 11:08pm
            I'd edit out the majority of those 'now's but it's really up to you. That's honestly the best thing about this game is if you stick with it you'll improve so dramatically over the course of a single... more
            • I want one!Hannibal, Tue Sep 28 11:13pm
              It would be nice to know where I stand as a writer. Although this is nothing more than glorified fanfiction, I still enjoy it. The drive to write has been lacking for ages, but I never forget this... more
              • Sure...Zeo, Wed Sep 29 2:25am
                But first you have to write something! OH HO HO!
                • now whatdoomwalker, Wed Sep 29 11:09am
                  Well, now what do I do? Do I just need to wait until my character gets accepted or is it already accepted? I don't know because I haven't been told and if he isn't then what do I need to do to submit ... more
                • You...Hannibal, Wed Sep 29 3:43am
                  You're good.
                  • To Wait.Zeo, Wed Sep 29 12:25pm
                    He still needs to get the official okay from Kail. I'll e-mail him and see if I can get this going.
                    • Quiet long timedoomwalker, Sat Oct 16 3:16pm
                      I've been waiting what I think has been a month for someone to tell me whether or not I have been authorized. So would someone tell me whether or not I am and if I'm not yet then give me a ball park... more
                    • Okaydoomwalker, Thu Sep 30 1:37am
                      Okay, I can wait.
            • Of coursedoomwalker, Thu Sep 23 3:58pm
              Of course I want help I'm terrible at this. I need improvement and any vet that's willing to help will be great.
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