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Zeo
You can submit it as it stands.
Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:08pm
69.132.112.33

I'd edit out the majority of those 'now's but it's really up to you.

That's honestly the best thing about this game is if you stick with it you'll improve so dramatically over the course of a single year it'll nearly blow your mind.

I tend to harp on this fact with any newbie as any vet can tell you but my writing when I started was comparable to pig shit. I'm light years beyond what I was. There's a hell of a ways for me to go still but I can see my improvement just by looking back.

I made a promise a few months back that I would give critiques to anyone that wanted 'em. If you do, just say so.

  • dangdoomwalker, Wed Sep 22 8:03pm
    Dang, okay I'm still working on that whole writing thing. I'm trying to get better at it, and as for my character sheet do I need to redo it or just submit it as is?
    • You can submit it as it stands. — Zeo, Wed Sep 22 11:08pm
      • I want one!Hannibal, Tue Sep 28 11:13pm
        It would be nice to know where I stand as a writer. Although this is nothing more than glorified fanfiction, I still enjoy it. The drive to write has been lacking for ages, but I never forget this... more
        • Sure...Zeo, Wed Sep 29 2:25am
          But first you have to write something! OH HO HO!
          • now whatdoomwalker, Wed Sep 29 11:09am
            Well, now what do I do? Do I just need to wait until my character gets accepted or is it already accepted? I don't know because I haven't been told and if he isn't then what do I need to do to submit ... more
          • You...Hannibal, Wed Sep 29 3:43am
            You're good.
            • To Wait.Zeo, Wed Sep 29 12:25pm
              He still needs to get the official okay from Kail. I'll e-mail him and see if I can get this going.
              • Quiet long timedoomwalker, Sat Oct 16 3:16pm
                I've been waiting what I think has been a month for someone to tell me whether or not I have been authorized. So would someone tell me whether or not I am and if I'm not yet then give me a ball park... more
                • Nope...Demios, Sun Oct 17 3:29am
                  If you really want to start writing, start writing non-canonically here on the bar board. Someone might even throw in a character to play with you until Kail returns from the Outer-Worlds and graces... more
                  • what?doomwalker, Sun Oct 17 6:41am
                    What does non-canonically mean?
              • Okaydoomwalker, Thu Sep 30 1:37am
                Okay, I can wait.
      • Of coursedoomwalker, Thu Sep 23 3:58pm
        Of course I want help I'm terrible at this. I need improvement and any vet that's willing to help will be great.
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