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Hannibal
I want one!
Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:13pm
69.244.38.195

It would be nice to know where I stand as a writer. Although this is nothing more than glorified fanfiction, I still enjoy it. The drive to write has been lacking for ages, but I never forget this place.

If you have time and/or the inclination to indulge my request for a critque, I appreciate it.

  • You can submit it as it stands.Zeo, Wed Sep 22 11:08pm
    I'd edit out the majority of those 'now's but it's really up to you. That's honestly the best thing about this game is if you stick with it you'll improve so dramatically over the course of a single... more
    • I want one! — Hannibal, Tue Sep 28 11:13pm
      • Sure...Zeo, Wed Sep 29 2:25am
        But first you have to write something! OH HO HO!
        • now whatdoomwalker, Wed Sep 29 11:09am
          Well, now what do I do? Do I just need to wait until my character gets accepted or is it already accepted? I don't know because I haven't been told and if he isn't then what do I need to do to submit ... more
        • You...Hannibal, Wed Sep 29 3:43am
          You're good.
          • To Wait.Zeo, Wed Sep 29 12:25pm
            He still needs to get the official okay from Kail. I'll e-mail him and see if I can get this going.
            • Quiet long timedoomwalker, Sat Oct 16 3:16pm
              I've been waiting what I think has been a month for someone to tell me whether or not I have been authorized. So would someone tell me whether or not I am and if I'm not yet then give me a ball park... more
              • Nope...Demios, Sun Oct 17 3:29am
                If you really want to start writing, start writing non-canonically here on the bar board. Someone might even throw in a character to play with you until Kail returns from the Outer-Worlds and graces... more
                • what?doomwalker, Sun Oct 17 6:41am
                  What does non-canonically mean?
            • Okaydoomwalker, Thu Sep 30 1:37am
              Okay, I can wait.
    • Of coursedoomwalker, Thu Sep 23 3:58pm
      Of course I want help I'm terrible at this. I need improvement and any vet that's willing to help will be great.
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