LJB
Do me next. (nm)
Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:32pm
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  • Review stuff the SEQUEL!Zeo, Thu Oct 21 5:48pm
    Demios, my friend, I don't know what you want me to say. You know I'm a fan of your stuff if only for the fact that there is always a base-line level of quality you rarely dip below. Your technical... more
    • A trilogy?Demios, Thu Oct 21 11:02pm
      Most of that is fair. I will say though... The technical fight scenes are written the way they are because I have a lot of fun writing them that way. You're absolutely right that I could spend more... more
      • Fair enough!Zeo, Thu Oct 21 11:16pm
        I knew you'd be the one to critique my critiquing! And I gotta be honest the whole eyes thing was a complete spur of the moment thing that right after I wrote it I read it and it sent a little shiver ... more
    • Do me next. (nm) — LJB, Thu Oct 21 6:32pm
      • Bob you haven't written anything in...Zeo, Thu Oct 21 6:47pm
        What... 3 maybe 6 months? Besides I'm not sure I'm egotistical enough for all that. It'd be like the shrub critiquing the redwood.
        • *smirks*LJB, Thu Oct 21 6:58pm
          See, I knew you wouldn't.
          • So it's a CHALLENGE?Zeo, Thu Oct 21 7:22pm
            Well then. Have at thee sir and let slip the dogs of war! But you must return the favor eh!? And now I have to go dig up something you've written from the dusty and cobwebbed recesses of the site.... more
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