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Zeo
Fair enough!
Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:16pm
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I knew you'd be the one to critique my critiquing!

And I gotta be honest the whole eyes thing was a complete spur of the moment thing that right after I wrote it I read it and it sent a little shiver down my spine.

As for the action, I understand that you like writing it that way but the bigger the chunk for action the more I tend to just skim over it. No offense meant it just doesn't 'do it' for me as a reader. I guess that's why Salvatore never really caught on with me. But there're a shit-ton of people that love him so there's certainly nothing wrong with the technical approach!

  • A trilogy?Demios, Thu Oct 21 11:02pm
    Most of that is fair. I will say though... The technical fight scenes are written the way they are because I have a lot of fun writing them that way. You're absolutely right that I could spend more... more
    • Fair enough! — Zeo, Thu Oct 21 11:16pm
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