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It's going to be a long day
Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:34am

Dust blew across the arid wasteland that stretched before him. He checked his scanner for even the slightest glint of life within a five mile radius, but nothing was showing up. " Well shit" Doomwalker said as he looked around. "Maybe I shouldn't of blown up that dump I called home" he chuckled.

He walked on for what seemed like days until his scanner picked up what appeared to be a small town about three miles east from him. As he turned to walk towards the town he saw two blips approaching him from that direction. With a smile "looks like they sent the welcoming committee" he said. He decided to wait on them considering he hadn't seem almost anything living in almost a week.

As two patrol cars appeared in the distance he touched the shadow behind the rock he was sitting on. With a devilish grin on his face his body slowly disappeared out of sight as if it was never there. The cars arrived and saw nothing more than what appeared to be just a rock. "What the hell is going on here" one officer said. " Hell if I know" said the other, " You boys looking for me?" Doomwalker said still cloaked. They both jumped back pulled their guns and started looking around frantically looking for where the voice came from.

Doomwalker uncloaked himself and materialized in front of them "Looking for little old me?" He said with a smirk on his face. The officers jumped back "You...your coming with us" the first officer stuttered. "Oh I am? He-he and whose going to make me? Now maybe if you asked nicely I would go with you." Doomwalker replied. "Would you puh..please come with us" the second officer said. "Now that's much better" Doomwalker smirked.

    • Three Things.Zeo, Sun Oct 24 12:22pm
      1. Good on ya for finally taking the initiative to do a little practice-posting. 2. Did you get my emails concerning your submission? 3. If there were any more grinning, smirking, and just generally... more
      • uhm..doomwalker, Sun Oct 24 7:47pm
        answer to number 2 no okay I get the smirking thing I'll work on it and his skull has been fractured around the jaw so he can at least look like he has facial expressions.
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