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Brandon
Lost In Venice
Tue Mar 6, 2018 1:08pm
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Jayden,

Your story is very, very good. One specific part that I really love is when you said,"Just then, Dr. Walsh came over the loud speaker. “Mrs. Slater! You just won teacher of the year! The prize is one million dollars!” “YESSSSS BABYY!!!!!!!!” said Mrs. Slater, crying with joy." I also like your part where you say,"“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEEEE AREEE ALLL GOOIINNGG TOOOO DIEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!’’ Jay yelled, at top of his lungs." Overall, the story is very creative and a real masterpiece.

Sincerely,
Brandon

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