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AnnaBee
Possible sporking required?
Fri Mar 9, 2012 11:53am
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Hey. This is the very first fanfiction I wrote, and the only one I've ever posted on FF.net.

It's the ONLY Bartimeus Trilogy/Axis Powers Hetalia fanfiction out there. I'm not sure whether this is a good thing or a bad thing.

Can someone read it, and spork it if it requires sporking?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7276682/1/The_Pestilential_Spheres


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  • Don't think it is. — Mr. Eldritch, Sat Mar 10 12:01am
    I'm not familiar with Axis Power Hetalia, but I have read the Bartimeus Trilogy, and I can't actually find anything about this that requires sporking. In fact, it's actually pretty good. It's... more
    • Well okay, there's one thing — Mr. Eldritch, Sat Mar 10 12:11am
      Kitty's description is pretty Sue-ish- there's not enough time after her introduction to really establish her as a Sue, but the "trendy" descriptor combined with resilience is a warning sign. Still,... more
      • Thank you muchly. — AnnaBee, Sat Mar 10 3:22am
        Ohmygosh, you have NO idea how good that makes me feel. This was the very first fanfic I ever wrote. And I binge-read the Bartimeus books beforehand to make sure I got the flavour right. ^^; I'm... more
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