So, I was looking around the Pit, when I found something horrible, stupid, and canon-breaking. Its author calls it 'Legendary Heroes' and it's a Nanoha/Harry Potter crossover.... more
I couldn't read past the first paragraph, it was so disjointed. First, "A special charm" is just about the worst way to describe magic while still using proper grammar, and I have vagueness in spell... more
Brain hurty. — Ivan the Not-so-Terrible,Sat Mar 10 5:00am
Ehhh? Am I reading this right? Nanoha is the new DADA teacher, in Hogwarts? Ehhh? -Grasps heads, mumbles incoherently- Ohmygodkillitkillitdestroyitkillitannihilateit
Heavy, you're a sitting duck with it, but .50 caliber explosive armor piercing incendiary rounds (Yeah, they do exist) kill anything up to Replacement!Nanoha level. For her, we have another plan.
I don't actually know Nanoha, but every Harry Potter character is pitifully OOC and my brain also broke during the first chapter by the way. It's so broken that I temporarily forgot how to use commas.
Yeah. The main character works for an interdimensional organization that thinks mages are extremely rare--there've been, as far as they know, two good mages in the last 100 years or so. The main... more
Wait, no. The Fuwas were Samurai, although they are more ninja-like, with their ability to dodge bullets and break physics. My point still stands. And in paragraph one, that's mages from Earth.