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Thoughts on the teams so far...
Wed May 9, 2012 3:22am
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Team Nevermind- I like this type of team up, a bunch of people who go into something with no (or in some cases, BAD) ideas of what they are doing. Makes for a good read/watch in stuff.

I liked how the piece began, the random agents mulling about in the halls, looking at a posting board, and the different departments. Really sets the scene for the PPC being a big social hub, which is an idea I immensely like.

Story Four- D:D:D:D:D SLENDERMAN!?!? D:D:D:D:

... Anyway, the bar is a very good place to meet, especially for a rowdy type of group. It's good to see Gall again, and Suicide too! The team that slays together, stays together, right? I'm sure their victory celebrations will be quite a party!

Story One- Agent!July is, as she usually is, amusing to read. No messing around with sneaking or theatrics, just good ol' strongarming into playing a violent sport! It's definently fun to see all the new and old faces.


One team has no idea what they signed up for, one was mostly corraled against their will, another is a band of rowdy warrior types, and the last is one is 60% over eager, and 40% along for the ride. Quite the difference is recruitment methods and types of teams. I can't wait for it to start! :D










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