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Neshomeh
Permission Granted!
Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:30am
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Sorry you had to wait so long.

I quite liked both prompts. They have a good amount of humor and do a good job of showing the agents' personalities, and I especially loved the arc about the console from one story to the next. My only lingering question is: how did Effie manage to lose a box of TNT on the wrong side of the room? A precise military-type personage ought to keep better track of such things, I'd think, so a little explanation wouldn't have been amiss. It didn't bother me too much by the end thanks to the payoff with the console, but still, something to be aware of. {= )

I'm happy to see a new DOGA team, and I look forward to seeing them take out the "assains" and burn the bloody mansion in the COS in that fic. Blessings of Kanun and Spelin be upon you!

~Neshomeh

  • Permission Request RemasteredLonelyStar, Sun Jul 30 2:53pm
    40 days ago, I requested permission. Two weeks later, my permission giver begged off, citing Life Reasons. He transferred my request to Delta Juliette. It's been 22 days and I haven't heard a peep... more
    • Congratulations! :)Zingenmir, Mon Jul 31 11:50am
      I'm also sorry about the long wait--something must have come up for Delta Juliette, I suppose. But yes, congratulations! Like I said when I started looking at your permission request, I like your... more
    • Permission Granted! — Neshomeh, Mon Jul 31 9:30am
      • Belated congrats! *tosses Spikes* (nm)SkarmorySilver, Fri Aug 4 8:36am
      • Congrats, new knight!Hardric, Wed Aug 2 3:59pm
        And to go with it, here is a self-updating guidebook of all the deathtraps in the multiverse.
      • Thank you!LonelyStar, Mon Jul 31 11:44am
        I'll be getting right to that. Oh, and as for how Effie lost that box? Min mistook it for one Effie loaned her and grabbed it while Effie was off doing something else.
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