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Mon Aug 7, 2017 8:51pm

  • Just finished reading the missionAnonymous, Mon Aug 7 8:49pm
    And all I caught was a possible missing scene break. You might want to add a scene break before the paragraph starting "Inside the fic, Zeb ran a tongue over his protruding teeth and grimaced." Also, ... more
    • That post was mine. (nm) — son_of_heaven176, Mon Aug 7 8:51pm
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