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That was good overall
Mon Aug 20, 2018 11:54pm

I liked that you did a good job of giving a sense of how bewildering not being a slave anymore was.

One thing I'm confused about (and this could be not knowing Star Wars well) is that Lorson not being tested for Force sensitivity was mentioned and then the test never happened.

- Tomash

  • Prompt 2.Iximaz, Mon Aug 20 11:01pm
    ((Not an escape in the traditional sense, but I'd say this one counts.)) 8386071 stood still, stripped to the waist with his arms bound in front of him as the Mandalorian circled him slowly. “How... more
    • That was good overall — Tomash, Mon Aug 20 11:54pm
      • My thought...Iximaz, Mon Aug 20 11:58pm that while Jaleth was curious enough to ask, he wasn't curious enough to find out for certain, and Lorson just had better things to do with his time. As far as they're both concerned, if he can ... more
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