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Neshomeh
I would read this.
Sat Aug 25, 2018 12:31pm
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That paragraph is a little disturbing, and the context sounds fascinating. Good combination for generating interest!

~Neshomeh

  • From "The Bone Man"Scapegrace, Fri Aug 24 9:47am
    Trentís back arched and he coughed again, his whole body twisting with release and pain. Again and again he felt the rush come, break over him like waves or a collapsing dune. His face screwed up in... more
    • I would read this. — Neshomeh, Sat Aug 25 12:31pm
      • Y'know what? You can!Scapegrace, Sat Aug 25 5:40pm
        You can read it here. =]
        • I don't even.Thoth, Thu Aug 30 7:13pm
          That was good. I just have no idea what was going on.
        • I'm sorry I took so long to read this.Neshomeh, Thu Aug 30 6:38pm
          First because it was rude of me. Second because wow, that is so cool! I have no idea what is actually going on, because I'm pretty sure this guy has silicosis from all the dust and I am quite sure no ... more
        • Hot DAMN that was beautiful. =OS.M.F., Sun Aug 26 9:38am
          That reward was truly well deserved. And the part that describes the pain as acting out of spite, and everything just drifting as the Bone Man does his work... absolutely wonderful.
    • That's inherently amazingLarfen J. Stocke, esq., Fri Aug 24 10:14am
      That sounds weird in just the right way, and that bloody paragraph you dropped on doesn't even reveal it - just the build-up!
      • Thanks!Scapegrace, Fri Aug 24 2:52pm
        It got a Merit for my MA Creative Writing course, so I'd say the finished product lives up to expectations. =]
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