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Sat Sep 1, 2018 9:54pm

I've been trying to pay more attention to setting the scene, so it's good to know it went over well!

"Mile girl" just amused me in particular because it gives me the mental image of an Elf who's actually an entire mile wide. ^^; As for The Jetsons, Ix is Muggleborn and watched a lot of TV as a kid when recovering from full moons; I figure at least one of her parents turned it on for her thinking she'd enjoy it. (She did. Very much. Though she was disappointed by the lack of TARDISes.)

I'm sure their honeymoon will be very happy and totally uneventful with no interruptions whatsoever. ;)

  • Good one!Neshomeh, Sat Sep 1 9:33pm
    My thoughts are the same as S.M.F.'s: well balanced between sporking and character fluff, good choice of a bizarre fic that could seriously have been done as original fic without losing anything.... more
    • Thank you! — Iximaz, Sat Sep 1 9:54pm
      • So...Neshomeh, Sat Sep 1 10:33pm
        Everything is going smoothly when le gasp! A commotion on the beach! What could possibly have intruded on this idyllic moment? Why, a clutch of fire-lizards is hatching! How shocking! Events!... more
        • That'll only be cute for now.Thoth, Sat Sep 1 10:41pm
          Just wait until they're inevitably stranded alone together for over a month because this is Ix, and I'm betting she'd find a way to wring drama out of this.
          • Hey, it could happen.Neshomeh, Sat Sep 1 10:57pm
            It's not like this mission was really dramatic, despite coming along to interrupt their scheduled time off right on schedule. {= ) ~Neshomeh
            • Hey, come on, I've been behaving!Iximaz, Sat Sep 1 11:04pm
              *promptly kills off characters* I actually wasn't planning on writing the honeymoon itself—that seems like it would be rather *cough* private, between the two of them. You know? Besides, Ix and... more
              • *meanwhile...*Neshomeh, Sun Sep 2 11:16am
                *quietly constructs elaborate machines of angst while no one is looking* ^_~ If you did want to write honeymoon fluff, you wouldn't have to go into the very private stuff. Leaving the whole thing a... more
              • ...*Raises eyebrow.* (nm)Thoth, Sat Sep 1 11:12pm
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