Quincy Jones
Short Non-PPC Story Plug
Mon Jan 7, 2019 11:15am
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Hey! I wrote a thing 'cause I got inspired the other day. It's pretty short (est. 1 page) and I'd really appreciate some feedback/advice. It has some slight language and adult themes but IMO it's pretty tame.

Here it is, as a linkshare, theoretically with commenting permissions: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-8a9abOJFEtS5QAkWpYyH5xN-v1t-oKfcrFJ1AitOYs

    • Very nice!Mirage Fontane, Tue Jan 8 1:51pm
      I found myself very interested in the backstory of the main character, especially his relationship with the new Queen. The style is very... well, I only know the word in Hungarian, it means something ... more
      • Aww, thank you! Quincy Jones , Tue Jan 8 5:48pm
        That has to be the best compliment I've ever gotten, thanks! I'm glad my writing sounds natural. I've been working on that for a long time. And I'm also really glad you're interested in the backstory ... more
    • It's called "Two Ships." (nm)Quincy Jones, Mon Jan 7 11:16am
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