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a sweet story
Tue Sep 11, 2018 10:30am

I didn’t catch this the first time around. It sounds like it really was written by a teenage girl and is so realistic. Also I was afraid you’d go on to sex (or grossness) but you didn’t. Thanks!

(P.S. Also the first time I heard of a white guy named Jamal!)

  • Try this onecheryl, Mon Sep 10 9:57pm
    I wrote it a couple of years ago...;article=56040;title=The%20ASN%20Story%20Board Would love to know your thoughts on it!
    • Re: Try this oneKnight-Streaker, Thu Sep 27 9:00am
      Cheryl, I loved the story.
    • My CFNM storyAnonymous, Sat Sep 15 10:18pm
      I wrote a CFNM story. I also have a lot of CFNM stories in my favorites. Here is my profile.
      • Re: MY CFNM STORYKnight-Streaker, Thu Sep 27 8:58am
        I loved the stories of Sarah and Dean and the others. Did you ever think of adding on additional chapters? I would love to read more about Christina and Dean.
    • a sweet story — donnylaja, Tue Sep 11 10:30am
      • Re: a sweet storycheryl, Tue Sep 11 8:44pm
        I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't normally write about sex or humiliation, so no worries there! And I don't really give Jamal a race, although I do mention "the sunlight playing on the water droplets... more
        • Jamaldonnylaja, Tue Sep 11 9:02pm
          You did say he had a “pasty white butt”, probably a proofreading error. When a black male character appears in erotic fiction I always prepare for the worst, but you didn’t go there, fortunately. One ... more
          • Aaaahhhhh!cheryl, Wed Sep 12 7:09am
            I did do that! So sorry to all. Story ruined. Dang it!!! :-) ~cheryl
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