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cheryl
Re: a sweet story
Tue Sep 11, 2018 8:44pm
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't normally write about sex or humiliation, so no worries there!

And I don't really give Jamal a race, although I do mention "the sunlight playing on the water droplets decorating his dark skin," and his thick black hair. I had intended him to be a black boy by the name and subtle hints, but didn't want to write about his race, nor the race of either of the other boys (nor of the main character).

Thanks again for reading!

  • a sweet storydonnylaja, Tue Sep 11 10:30am
    I didn’t catch this the first time around. It sounds like it really was written by a teenage girl and is so realistic. Also I was afraid you’d go on to sex (or grossness) but you didn’t. Thanks!... more
    • Re: a sweet story — cheryl, Tue Sep 11 8:44pm
      • Jamaldonnylaja, Tue Sep 11 9:02pm
        You did say he had a “pasty white butt”, probably a proofreading error. When a black male character appears in erotic fiction I always prepare for the worst, but you didn’t go there, fortunately. One ... more
        • Aaaahhhhh!cheryl, Wed Sep 12 7:09am
          I did do that! So sorry to all. Story ruined. Dang it!!! :-) ~cheryl
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