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These ones get an exclamation mark because they actually count! Welcome to the game. {= D

1) Fan-love - 1 point. This is dangerously close to "I'm so glad you sporked that," but the second sentence saves it by making it about one of the author's writing choices (having Kitty react). However, it doesn't really get into what effect this has on the story.

2) Characterization - 3 points. Gives the what and why with specific examples, and the effect on the reader.

3) Formatting - 3 points. ... This is starting to look like an easy way to net points, since it's so simple to explain what the problem is, why, and how to fix it. {= P

4) Character development - 3 points. Again, I've lumped the last two paragraphs together. In this case, it's because no solution was given for the problem presented in the second-to-last paragraph, but the solution in the last one is explicitly applied to both. The problems for the reader seem to apply to both, as well, so all in all it's a good discussion.

TOTAL: 10 points.

~Neshomeh

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March Read & Review Challenge! — Neshomeh, Thu Mar 1 18:36

It's National Reading Month here in the States, and in NeshomehLand, it's also PPC Challenge Month, when I come up with random things to stir people out of the late-winter, not-yet-spring doldrums... more
- Lócë and Infinity, Mission 2 — Antigone68104, Fri Mar 30 13:02
  
  Mission link: http://alania-ppc.livejournal.com/1251.html This is a ST:TOS Mary Sue mission. --- Overall, I liked this mission. The Curse Of The Redshirt was handled well; Infinity is justified in... more
- Dee and Milask, mission one — Miah, Sat Mar 10 14:57
  
  I'm not sure who wrote these. I didn't see the author listed on the mission heading, or anywhere on the wiki, so I don't believe I have read this author before. I know I have never read these agents... more
- 'The Crusader King' — Huinesoron, Thu Mar 8 23:04
  
  ((Terri's work again - I'm just the brain behind her)) From the Personal Files of Terri Ryan, Department of Personnel Well, I've been issued an informal warning by the R&R Division. Apparently my... more
- Okay, why not? — Huinesoron, Thu Mar 8 21:31
  
  ((I hope you don't mind, but I'm handing the actual work of reviewing off to Terri. She's more interesting than me)) From the Personal Files of Terri Ryan, Department of Personnel Everyone in DOGA... more
- Almost lost this whole comment due to LJ being stupid. — doctorlit, Sun Mar 4 16:40
  
  (Don't really care about winning, I'm just happy to be participating.) A review of our solitary Indiana Jones mission by Chatvert: http://wizkit.livejournal.com/904.html which I tried to post there,... more
- - Points! — Neshomeh, Sun Mar 4 18:17
- On "Architeuthis, Mission 1: The Beginning" — Phobos, Sat Mar 3 12:18
  
  I am not going to participate in the actual contest portion of this, as I am married to the judge, and that is prize enough for me. I will, however, still be reviewing things and I welcome Neshomeh... more
- - Points — Neshomeh, Sun Mar 4 17:49
    
    I'm going to try to run through it as efficiently as possible, without rambling. Let's see how it goes. 1) Info-dump - 2 points. Lays out the problem of a dry presentation of facts dragging down the... more
- Re: March Read & Review Challenge! — Aeidhryn, Sat Mar 3 09:41
  
  How about this: I'll review two people that I haven't heard of before, and two more people that ask for a review. Plus Neshomeh, because I didn't know that we had had National Reading Month. I'll... more
- - Suits me, I guess. — Neshomeh, Sat Mar 3 11:29
    
    I'll be honest, I'm down with anything that gets me reviews. >.> I might give you points for stuff that qualifies anyway, though, just in case you change your mind. Who knows, you might win. {= ) I... more
  - - I don't mind either way. (nm) — Aeidhryn, Sat Mar 3 12:57

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