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Antigone68104
Lócë and Infinity, Mission 2
Fri Mar 30, 2012 13:02
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Mission link: http://alania-ppc.livejournal.com/1251.html

This is a ST:TOS Mary Sue mission.

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Overall, I liked this mission. The Curse Of The Redshirt was handled well; Infinity is justified in interpreting the events as ordinary clumsiness and/or ill fortune, and Lócë is justified in interpreting the events as Redshirt Effect.

It seemed a bit odd that Lócë tried to change his disguise through the RA, instead of using a DORKS, but this _is_ a mission from 2006. I don't see a date for the DORKS' invention on the wiki, but it's certainly possible that when the mission was written going through the RA (and the console) was the only way to alter a disguise.

However, I have to wonder what Infinity is doing in the Department of Mary Sues. Vulcans may be generally non-violent, but they are capable of killing and practice a canon martial art with at least one deadly maneuver. Infinity's extreme pacifism, in and of itself, isn't bad. But it makes me wonder why she signed on to be an Assassin in the first place. It seems a bit late for her to be objecting to the job requirements.

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