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Huinesoron
((How about now? ^_^))
Thu Sep 3, 2015 09:18
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((I would go with something like this:

"Otornonya? Meldaner, nį sillumė hastaina?"

I've stuck a possessive pronoun on 'brother', to make 'my brother'. Meldaner I've left untouched - is that 'beloved man'? If so, I kind of like it - where did you pick it up?

The main phrase I've invented a Quenya idiom (since there are no Quenya words coming anywhere near 'aught' or 'amiss'): 'is the hour marred?'. Given their preoccupation with the Marring of Arda, it seems like the sort of casual phrase that would show up. Think of it as the equivalent of 'it's all gone to pot'.

I will resist the temptation to go through and translate all of G+N's Quenya/Sindarin dialogue for you...

hS))

  • ...Gurnirel had elected to lie underneath several of the trees, on a soft bed of moss. She hummed to herself as she lay, smiling faintly up at the leaves and thinking the words of a song written in... more
    • ((How about now? ^_^)) — Huinesoron, Thu Sep 3 09:18
      • ((And thank you! Always fun to see something like this :D Especially when you wake up to it (as I did on the day when I started writing this). Meldaner is indeed 'beloved man', though I also have it... more
        • ((So: work is boring, Quenya isn't.))Huinesoron, Fri Sep 11 10:22
          ((Here's the entirety of Gurnirel's Quenya speech: Otornonya? Meldaner, nį sillumė hastaina? Meldaner? Nį sillumė tanca? Otorno, nį elyė tanca? Otornonya? Meldaner, mana martėa tyen? I've chosen to... more
    • Amy scrambled into the centre of the bed.the Irish Samurai, Mon Aug 31 20:34
      And jumped again when she heard the voice - it sounded like nonsense, but there was clearly someone else in the next room, and she didn't think it was her partner. She looked around the room in panic ... more
      • It was unlike the ellon not to respond--they had faced enough dangers that he would not fail to reassure her. Moreover he appeared to be alone--perhaps he was dreaming? She hesitated, but only for a... more
        • Amy was listening so intently...the Irish Samurai, Tue Sep 1 09:31
          ... that when she heard the knock she actually forgot to do anything. The door opening did trigger a reaction, however - she made a noise best transcribed as 'Meep!', grabbed at the blanket to either ... more
          • "Brother, are you well?"DawnFire, Wed Sep 2 10:32
            Gurnirel entered the room, frowning at the sight of her partner. He was curled into a ball, and had just fallen over, of all things. Was he ill? Injured? What could possibly have injured him inside... more
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