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Mon Sep 10, 2018 17:01

Good bit, that.

  • Here's the next bit, well its a start - mike, Mon Sep 10 16:16
    Filename:- Tinkletap Part 2. Written Monday September 10th 2018 ARRIVALS and DEPARTURES One of the charming local customs that Timothy had adopted soon after moving to Brocks Burn was to put out a... more
    • Should be BARN not Burn - mike, Tue Sep 11 17:31
      Burn doesn't fit into that part of Brythan it belongs far up North and refers to a body of water. So from now on I'll be spelling it as Brocks Barn which needs no explanation but if it did I'd invent ... more
      • Gotta like... - Sarge, Tue Sep 11 18:14
        ...the badger story, though the Battle of Brocks Barn does have ring to it. Perhaps the Battle of Brocks Barn might turn out to be an annually celebrated victory of the badger over the locals... more
        • Re: Gotta like... - roger, Wed Sep 12 07:42
          Gurning? Too lazy to look it up.
          • GURNING - mike, Wed Sep 12 08:17
            • Re: GURNING - roger, Thu Sep 13 08:04
              Gurning. I think I'm sorry I asked.
              • And now, respectability... - sarge, Fri Sep 14 09:20
                ...and a bit of a cultural lesson. The Gurning championship is a very famous part of what Egremont call the Crab Fair. Here comes the good bit. The fair itself is one of the oldest in the world, said ... more
        • YES! I like it - mike, Tue Sep 11 18:16
          Jolly good idea that about the Battle of Brocks Barn. Got Herts/Essex/Suffolk country lore written all over it.
    • Good - sarge, Mon Sep 10 17:01
      • Re: Good - roger, Tue Sep 11 09:10
        Yes, I like that. Should probably go near the start of the story. Hmmmm. Maybe even be the start.
        • I think you're right Roger - mike, Tue Sep 11 11:35
          Remember these two pieces are NOT the story but more of an outline that I know will need more careful writing. However I agree that the second part should have some of the first part integrated into... more
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