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Blackburn Warner
Discussion 10/28
Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:28pm
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Now that I have finally written and turned in my Boyle paper, it is easy to look back on it and think about how I did. I was really glad I brought it to Mr. Bates so he could look at it before I turned it in. it turns out if was a good thing I did because the paper was really unorganized. I knew it wasnít as organized as it should be but I didnít realize that it was as bad as it actually was. Besides the organization, I think the paper itself was actually pretty good. I used a lot of quotes from the book to prove what I was writing. I also had the analysis all wrong for what Boyle thought about the topic. If I hadnít fixed that, my grade could have been disastrous.
The hardest part of the paper was obliviously the organization. I knew what I wanted to say but when I actually tried to write it, I was having problems deciding how to say it and when to put it into the paper. Before it was revised, the paper jumped all over the place and it was hard to follow. When I went back to make the flow better, I could easily see what I had done. I fixed it by combining some of the paragraphs that were about the same story. Instead of jumping between stories, the paper was smooth and was easy to follow.
The easiest part of writing the paper was supporting what I said with words from the text. Everything I said had a quote that could support it. It surprised me that the stories were so easy to pick through and find good quotes. It was also easy to site the quotes because Mr. Bates saved us time by telling us how easy it was to quote Boyle. All we needed to do was put in parenthesis the author and page number. I am anxious to see what I got on the paper because I feel like getting it read over before I turned it in really helped. Hopefully the last two papers will be just as easy to write and I will do well on them too.

  • 10/28 Discussion - Andy Bates, Thu Oct 27 7:52pm
    Now that you have completed the Boyle paper, what was the greatest challenge about the paper for you? What did you find least challenging about it? How well do you think your analysis went?
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    • Online Discussion 10/28 - Chris Kidd, Fri Oct 28 4:54pm
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    • Online Discussion 10/28 - Erin Schwartz, Fri Oct 28 3:57pm
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    • Online Discussion 10/28 - Elizabeth McCarty, Fri Oct 28 3:25pm
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    • Online Discussion 10/28 - Nicole Brown, Fri Oct 28 2:10pm
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    • 10/28 Discussion - Hunter Wright, Fri Oct 28 2:09pm
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    • 10/28 - Jacqueline Luicci, Fri Oct 28 1:42pm
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    • Online Discussion - Shannan Dahlka, Fri Oct 28 1:31pm
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    • Discussion Question - Gabrielle Tucker, Fri Oct 28 1:21pm
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    • 10/28 - Sheree Beasley, Fri Oct 28 1:19pm
      Since I have finished the paper, I think it went very well. The only thing that was challenging was the contrasting, because it seemed like there was not enough to go by with it. I only happened to... more
    • Re: 10/28 Discussion - Tyler Onuska, Fri Oct 28 1:19pm
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    • 10-28 online discussion - Cliff Stallings, Fri Oct 28 1:11pm
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    • Discussion 10/26 - Caleb Childress, Fri Oct 28 1:10pm
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    • 10/28 discussion - Therese Dalheim, Fri Oct 28 12:59pm
      Aside from being relieved that I finished my Boyle paper, I feel I did fairly well on it. The greatest challenge I faced writing this paper was trying not to summarize it. I felt in order to pick out ... more
    • discussion 10/28 - Lindsey Newton, Fri Oct 28 12:50pm
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    • Discussion 10/28 - Blackburn Warner, Fri Oct 28 12:28pm
    • 10/28 discussion - Tanika Reddon, Fri Oct 28 12:07pm
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    • Online Discussion 10/28 - Meredith Masteller, Fri Oct 28 12:02pm
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    • Online discussion 10/28 - Sharnesha Brentley, Fri Oct 28 11:11am
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    • 10/28 Discussion - Emily Walters, Fri Oct 28 10:52am
      The greatest challenge that I had on the Boyle paper was getting started and figuring out what I was going to write about. I had not even thought about the paper till the week before it was due, but... more
    • 10/28 Discussion - Courtney Riddle, Fri Oct 28 9:19am
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