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Jasmine Berryman
Boyle Paper
Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:26pm
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My progress with the Boyle paper has improved drastically since earlier today. I have my introduction almost completed. I have completed my outline and all I have to do now is make a paper out of it. Hopefully I can write half of the paper tonight and complete the rest tomorrow leaving me some extra time to revise it.
The most challenging part of this paper was preparing it. Since you gave us the format in which you want us to write the paper it has helped a lot. But initially I was planning to do a brief summary of both of the stories. Then I planned to write a paragraph comparing their similarities another one comparing their differences and a concluding paragraph about the whole paper in general. But, now I’m struggling with coming up with different differences besides the opposite of the similarities. I’m also trying to shed a light one the less obvious statements Boyle might be making. So another challenge right now is trying to avoid over analyzing as well as thinking on the surface.
I believe the introduction was the least difficult part of the paper. It was pretty straight forward since it warns the audience of the two stories I’m comparing and contrasting. Plus it gives the audience a full grasp of the paper just without detail. So, making the introduction was the least difficult part of the paper. I plan to put my own twist to it though.
So after reviewing the similarities and differences of all of the stories, I’ve decided to do my paper on the “Carnal Knowledge,” story as well as the “Little Fur People” story. Although we pointed out a lot of similarities and differences in the stories, I hope to shed a light on some of the less defined statements Boyle might be making. I will certainly be adding the main concepts mentioned in class on the two stories as well.

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