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Keleigh Britt
Good & Bad of my Personal Narrative
Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:25pm
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After submitting my personal narrative I am the most proud of my introduction and conclusion paragraphs. I have never been a strong writer through high school, however, my introduction and conclusion paragraphs have always had captivating sentences that grab the reader. One of the methods I often use for my introduction is descriptive sentences that hold a lot of imagery. This way the reader is already thinking about what the paper could possibly be about. After the introduction keys the reader into what the paper will be talking about I am able to write the rest of the paper.
When it comes to the body paragraphs I have always had the most difficulties fully describing what I feel. This makes it hard for me to get my point across in a couple of paragraphs. Being a weak writer this does set me back, however, I try to have people proof read all of my papers so I know what needs to be changed whether it is grammatically or structure.
Like the introduction paragraph, I am strong in my conclusion paragraph because I am able to capture key points without reinstating what has been said. This method allows my conclusion paragraphs to be short and sweet.
Overall, in high school I have written many personal narratives, some 6 pages and others 2 pages. However, each time I write a personal narrative I write it on something different that has happened in my life. I have written some on short events that are significant to me and I have written some that take place over a long period of time. I personally am not a fan of personal narratives because I have written so many over the years and I donít like living in the past. It is good to remember things from the past because those events shape us to who we are today, however, I like imagining what is in store for the future. So typically papers that illustrate what my future holds are easier for me to write because I can be creative with my goals that lie ahead.

  • 9/28 Discussion - Andy Bates, Thu Sep 27 10:04am
    Now that you have submitted your personal narratives, what are you most proud of about your paper? Most apprehensive? How has this assignment been different from typical assignments in the past?
    • now that its over - lexi short, Fri Sep 28 6:02pm
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    • Problems and things to be proud of - Eric Cobb, Fri Sep 28 4:42pm
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    • Proud Moments & Apprehensions - Emily Alfano, Fri Sep 28 4:23pm
      Now that I have submitted my personal narrative, I feel accomplished. The narrative was my first college paper. I passed it in on time and didnít stay up late the night before working on it. For... more
    • 9/28/12 Response - Braxton Smallwood, Fri Sep 28 4:18pm
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    • 9/28 Discussion - Joel Bendel, Fri Sep 28 3:47pm
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    • Response 9/28 - Haley Holland, Fri Sep 28 3:39pm
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    • on to the next paper - Megan Cassell, Fri Sep 28 1:07pm
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    • 9/28 discussion - Tina Brown, Fri Sep 28 11:26am
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    • Personal Narrative Finished - Rachel Blihar, Fri Sep 28 11:19am
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    • discussion 9/28 - Erin Kelly, Fri Sep 28 11:06am
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    • Opinion on Narrative - David Teague, Fri Sep 28 11:02am
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    • 9/28 Discussion - Ashlyn Eure, Fri Sep 28 11:02am
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