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Hunter Bowden
Re: 2/22 Discussion
Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:22pm
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The most challenging part of this paper was using my sources in an organized way. I also think that finding enough sources that had a lot of information that I could use as examples and to explain each one of my main points. As I started to write my paper I was using information from my sources too much and I knew that I needed to find a way to not use my sources as much. Also I found staying on topic was challenging for me. As I started to write this paper I saw myself staying on topic very well but as I started to get further and further into my paper I saw that I had started to get off topic and talk about thing that went along with my topic but not the key points that I was discussing in my paper.
The easiest part of the paper was picking a topic that I wanted to learn more about and inform other people about it. Before this paper was assigned I had to read an article in my Justice class about undercover work. After I read this article I wanted to learn more about it and when the paper was assigned I thought it would be a great opportunity to do this for my paper. Also I think finding the information throughout my sources to put in my paper was also pretty easy. After I found my sources pulling the information out of them was a piece of cake.
After submitting my paper I feel like the information I found that I put in my paper was one of my strengths. I think this because I found a lot of detailed description on all of my key points. I feel like since I found these detailed descriptions that my readers were going to be easily informed on the risks of undercover work.
After submitting my paper I feel like I have some weaknesses of my paper. When I got back after submitting my paper, I read my paper again and I saw that I could have worded some of the paragraphs better. I also think that I should have ordered my key point better.

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