Jamie Park
Re: A Badly Brewed Potion, Revised
Sat Aug 2, 2014 07:19

OOC - Good job, both on the post and on catching your own mistake.

As Jamie had called out to another student 'a few seats along' you could have chosen for this to be Anita, and to have responded to what he said, in order to get some interaction going between them. Authors will often end their posts with little 'hooks' like this to help it link in with someone else - as you did for Professor Yu in yours (who I don't write and thus can't reply as!)

Other than that, it seems like you're doing a great job and really getting the hang of this, so hopefully see you around for real as of tomorrow!

Just remember, this page is for practise only, so your character hasn't actually been to Potions or interacted with Jamie yet. She'll be fresh off the wagon and starting her first day tomorrow.

See you about!

  • A Badly Brewed Potion, Revised - Anita Tippet, Fri Aug 1 13:47
    OOC: I realized I hadn't been looking at the Roleplaying Rules before I posted the last reply. Here's my revision. Hopefully, I don't make anymore mistakes like that. IC: Anita could smell the... more
    • Re: A Badly Brewed Potion, Revised - Jamie Park, Sat Aug 2 07:19
      • Re: A Badly Brewed Potion, Revised - Anita Tippet, Sat Aug 2 12:37
        OOC: Thanks. Yeah, I didn't think about that. I know this is for practice, but at least it's giving me the feel for what will happen for real. So, I guess classes start September 1st for the IC. Then ... more
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