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Re: Hears my first ever lewd story (Erins humilating school day)
Wed Sep 5, 2018 7:57pm

Good setup, but trying splitting it into paragraphs to make it easier to read

  • Erin woke up to the sound of her alarm. Slightly annoyed by its loud beeping sound she grumbled and said “5 more minutes” and put her head back onto the pillow but then realized she had gym this... more
    • Re: Hears my first ever lewd story (Erins humilating school day) - Anonymous, Wed Sep 5 7:57pm
    • Plz give me feedback and commnets - Smellsgood2020, Wed Sep 5 7:35pm
      Part two were the real humlition amd embaressment is going to happen sry if this dissapoints or dosent follow the boards theme.
      • Feedback - The Controverser, Thu Sep 6 6:26am
        Okay, so, first of all, glad you decided to make the jump from reading to writing. Secondly, I do have to agree with Anonymous. Breaking the story up in paragraphs might be a pain in the butt for the ... more
        • very thoughtful feedback - Hooked6, Fri Sep 7 2:42pm
          The Controverser: I must say your feedback to the author of this story was very well thought out and helpful.It was concise yet contained all the important points needed to encourage this poster in... more
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