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very thoughtful feedback
Fri Sep 7, 2018 2:42pm

The Controverser:

I must say your feedback to the author of this story was very well thought out and helpful.It was concise yet contained all the important points needed to encourage this poster in seeing the positive aspects in his first attempt at writing. I hope the author takes this to heart and tries to continue this story.

  • Feedback - The Controverser, Thu Sep 6 6:26am
    Okay, so, first of all, glad you decided to make the jump from reading to writing. Secondly, I do have to agree with Anonymous. Breaking the story up in paragraphs might be a pain in the butt for the ... more
    • very thoughtful feedback - Hooked6, Fri Sep 7 2:42pm
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