TEEN GIRL PANTSING / STRIPPING DISCUSSION BOARD
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Perfect Stranger
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Wed Nov 28, 2018 15:54
88.108.39.139

Why didnt you like it.

Is the build up too slow? Do you prefer things less realistic?

I am trying to write stuff that hasnt been done before, adding a little character development and extra layers to the story.

Maybe expressing how you would have liked the story to have gone might help.

If you want to troll fine but unless you give reasons and try and be contrustive whats the point in your comment.

Id like to hear if people want to hear more of Mollie or not

Thanks P.S


  • Re: Feedback - Anonymous, Wed Nov 28 06:10
    i didnt write any feedback because i didnt like it
    • Feedback - Perfect Stranger, Wed Nov 28 15:54
    • Re: Feedback - nachtmuziek, Wed Nov 28 09:22
      Don't be a dick. It's fine if you didn't like it, but if that's all you're going to say without providing some constructive criticism or advice then keep it to yourself.
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