Re: Off the top of my head
Mon Dec 3, 2018 18:43

Looks like all the makings of a great revenge story with a holiday sub-plot are there.

You really thought this out too, in fact it wouldn't take much to write.
Just filling in the blanks.
Then adding in descriptive text for all the events in your plot.

And I havent done a revenge story either, maybe it can be written from the perspective of the little sister...that would make for an interesting look at the bullies humiliation.

  • Off the top of my head - The suggestor, Mon Dec 3 18:24
    My idea could be at least a couple parts. Maybe a prequel where a girl is humiliated on the last day before Christmas break at school. By the popular girl rival. Her peers see her in some state of... more
    • Re: Off the top of my head - PhoenixENF, Mon Dec 3 18:43
      • Hope you like the idea, and go through with it - The suggestor, Mon Dec 3 22:23
        Definitely would love to see you write this. And yes the little sister point of view would definitely be better than a third person pov. You could experience her humiliation through her eyes and what ... more
        • One last tiny detailed request - The suggestor, Mon Dec 3 22:40
          Her legs being spread while they make her cum, or her buttcheeks spread before or during the spanking. It's a tiny detail but one of my favorites in stories. So hot, something about being naked but... more
          • Still interested pheonix? - The suggestor, Wed Dec 26 17:19
            Idk if you'll see this but are you still interested in my plot idea?
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