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David Shirley
9/26 Discussion
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:48pm
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In my narrative I am most proud of the face that i was actually able to complete all four pages and then some. However, I think that I might have not given enough supporting details or experiences. I tried to give as much as I could without being too overbearing. It took me forever to figure out what exactly I wanted to right about. I had multiple examples in my head, but my car accident was probably the one that stuck out in my head the most. I am also proud of myself for being able to sit down and right exactly how I feel without having to hide anything from myself or from the readers. Typically Iím timid when it comes to sharing information about myself, but it just all seemed to flow onto the paper as I was typing it up. I am also apprehensive about any kind of errors that might be in the paper that I or the people who read it over with me might have overlooked. I tend to do that sometimes. When I first started writing my paper i thought it was all supposed to be single spaced and that I was going to be typing for forever but once I finally figured out that it was a double spaced paper, and that i had already written four pages worth of wording then, I was much more comfortable with what I had written. By the time I realized that it was supposed to be double spaced I had begun to run out of ways to support my these and I felt like I was just starting to repeat myself. I started writing the paper about a week or so before it was due with just coming up with which topic I thought would be the best and/or easiest to write about. I wrote about a page and a half before I took my first break, but after I took some time and found some people who were willing to help me out and look over what I was writing I was a lot more comfortable with completing my paper. (357 words)

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