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Natalie Del Gallo
Narrative
Fri Feb 13, 2015 2:35pm
75.110.10.95

I thought the paper was fine. The topic made it easy for me to have a lot to talk about. At first I was worried I wouldnít be able to fit my story into four pages but it ended up working just fine. I had multiple topics I could have chosen but I am very happy with the one I decided to write about. The paper was easy to write once I ha my outline prepared. After the outline I like to go ahead and type my paper and get it out of the way. I am not a fan of procrastinating essays because they stress me out. I think my strengths for the paper are my thesis and body paragraphs. I am pretty good about being descriptive and on topic. I donít really wander of topic because then the paper gets extremely confusing. Another strength if you can count this is my formatting. I am almost one hundred percent sure I formatted MLA style correctly for you. You made a point about us getting that right. I am most anxious about my grade. You said you were a harder grader and that there was no such thing as a perfect paper. After hearing you say that I am actually worried that I am going to receive a horrible grade when I was at least hoping for a low A, high B. Also I am worried about my grammar. It is not the best I tried extra hard in this paper to make sure I used everything correctly. Hopefully it worked. One time I had 13 extra-unneeded commas in a paper because I tried making it perfect and got a little to excited. So hopefully the grammar is an A plus for you on this one. My writing process was to come up with the topic I wanted to write about first. Then I like to create an outline of my paragraphs and the details I want to include in them. After that I start typing my paper and cross of my outline as I go. Once my outline is all crossed off I see if the paper meets the designated length and then make tweaks accordingly.

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