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Stephanie Proctor
Narrative Paper
Fri Feb 13, 2015 3:35pm
174.109.220.250

My narrative paper was exactly how I wanted it. My thesis was clear and I stayed in past tense. I explained my story and how it impacted me. I was apprehensive about the reading have questions and if they enjoy reading it. The writing process made it easy for me to write the paper because I did it spread out instead of all at once.
The strengths were that my paper was easy to read and answer the prompt exactly. My thesis was clear all throughout the paper and my conclusion re-stated the thesis but as proven. The story told exactly what the reader needed to know and nothing else. There was no extra information. All my points of how this event impacted me were easy to understand and the reader didnít need more information to understand how it impacted me.
I am apprehensive about the reader having any questions after reading the paper. I feel that I answered most questions that they reader would have put I wonder if there are still anymore to be answered. Another thing is that the reader might not have enjoyed reading it because no one can really relate. I have not meet a single person who has gone through four ankle surgeries within 2 years of your teenage years.
My writing process was I started writing my body paragraphs because I always have trouble with writing my introduction. I just wrote the story and I even called my mom to make sure I got all the times right and the other details. Then I continued until I finished the paper and then I went back to the introduction. I read through the paper and edited it myself. Next, I brought it to the writing center where a woman read through my paper and we worked on my paper together.
We made sure that my paper stayed past tense for the whole paper, changed my two grammatical errors, and fixed my introduction paragraphs. She even helped me with my title by giving me two tips that she usually does when she is picking a title. I then went back and read through all the changes and then printed my paper.
Word count: 366

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