Tue Aug 20, 2019 21:15

Hey Amelia!

It's great to see you posting! Just a quick note for the future, please make sure that all of your posts are written in past tense and are at least 200 words long (in accordance with our rules). If you're having trouble with getting them to that length, try and write about what your character is thinking about, what they are feeling, and what they are seeing around them. If you want some help, feel free to come in to the Author Cafe!

RMI Staff

  • Yeah, they are - Amelia, Tue Aug 20 12:07
    Amelia looks up and sees the hand and grabs it. Sh stands up and brushes of her jeans."T-thanks..." Amelia said, blushing from embarrassment. "And I guess we did both run into each other." she said,... more
    • OOC - Sophia, Tue Aug 20 21:15
    • Itís a little cringey, gotta be honest... - Deagret, Tue Aug 20 18:35
      ďím Deagret,Ē she replied politely. ďBut Dea works just fine. Itís nice to meet you, Amy!Ē The redhead straightened out her sweater quickly, a smile brightening up her pretty face. Wincing at at... more
      • Maybe a little cringy - Amelia, Wed Aug 21 05:42
        Amelia listened to Dea's first response and nodded. "I have to agree with you on that. It really doesn't have a lot of lot emotion. It seems that they don't want to be there at all. Like they rather... more
        • Sounds good to me! - Deagret, Fri Sep 13 23:28
          ďIím not sure itís the actors fault entirely though,Ē Deagret countered with a.pensive hum. ďPerhaps itís just bad writing. I mean, itís awkward in a ton of places, and honestly, I donít blame them... more
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