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steetboris
And here is fan comic PAGE 2!
Fri Aug 5, 2011 13:58
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Again, a lot of work, but here it is! Page two of my "4-pages mini comic"!



http://steetboris.deviantart.com/#/d45k4hb

I'm still uncertain about a few things like the dialogue, so if something is bothering you, I'll still be able to make some changes later.

Comments? :)

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  • Beauifully drawn! — Gidget, Wed Nov 9 11:03
    Your artwork is excellent (slightly different style from pages 3 and 4 -- did you use a different medium?) My only quibbles in an otherwise great chapter are the words that are hyphenated (whi-ning,... more
    • 1000x thanks! :) — steetboris, Thu Nov 10 12:32
      "Your artwork is excellent (slightly different style from pages 3 and 4 -- did you use a different medium?)" => Thanks, and well, I guess that's because I'm a beginner and still learning, I don't... more
  • No comments?? — steetboris, Thu Aug 18 09:32
    I must say I expected a little more comments here on HFCB...WHERE ARE YOU, GUYS? :'( This place used to be so active, even when I joined two years ago... Anyway, I hope I'll be able to do page 3 till ... more
    • Page 2 — Wauregan, Tue Aug 23 11:08
      It looks really good, definitely keep 'em coming! Since you asked for feedback on dialogue, I did have one thought. The line "It will be my pleasure..." seems (to me, anyway) like it might flow... more
      • Thanks! — steetboris, Fri Aug 26 03:16
        And yeah, maybe I'll change that line later. English is not my native language, you know ^^
        • Re: Thanks! — Wauregan, Fri Aug 26 12:43
          Wow! If I did know that, I'd forgotten. :-) Nice job!
  • Wonderful! — Pashka Geraskin, Fri Aug 5 23:48
    Thank you, Steet!
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