"Your artwork is excellent (slightly different style from pages 3 and 4 -- did you use a different medium?)"
=> Thanks, and well, I guess that's because I'm a beginner and still learning, I don't really have a style set in stone yet :) But the style I want to do is getting as close as to the original Disney/Talespin style! So no, I did not use a different medium, just my pen tablet and Photoshop.
"My only quibbles in an otherwise great chapter are the words that are hyphenated (whi-ning, cloudsur-fing Don Gar-bage -- it's hard to read if the letters are spread out in odd places)"
=> Yeah, sorry about that, someone else did the same comment. In fact my Photoshop was using french hyphenating, and considering I'm french, it didn't seem awkward to me! But I plan on going back to the pages and fixing some stuff like that. So thank you for the advice, I'll be sure to check that message again when I'll do :)
"Nice job with Kit's hand loosening the bolt. Hands are hand to draw!" => Yeah, well I have a big problem drawing hands actually, to do that one correctly I found some reference pics on the web ^^'
Thanks for your nice comments everyone, I'm kinda surprised I'm getting more comments now that it's the last page! (for now) That DOES motivate me to do some more. I probably won't do full comic pages in the close future (it requires hours of work...), but I'll try to do "regular" fanart in order to perfect my drawing of the characters.
Again, a lot of work, but here it is! Page two of my "4-pages mini comic"! http://steetboris.deviantart.com/#/d45k4hb I'm still uncertain about a few things like the dialogue, so if something is... more
Your artwork is excellent (slightly different style from pages 3 and 4 -- did you use a different medium?) My only quibbles in an otherwise great chapter are the words that are hyphenated (whi-ning,... more
I must say I expected a little more comments here on HFCB...WHERE ARE YOU, GUYS? :'( This place used to be so active, even when I joined two years ago... Anyway, I hope I'll be able to do page 3 till ... more
It looks really good, definitely keep 'em coming! Since you asked for feedback on dialogue, I did have one thought. The line "It will be my pleasure..." seems (to me, anyway) like it might flow... more